Feedback

Today we got feedback from a Media teacher regarding our work and these are the criticisms she gave us about our opening title sequence:

• Don't zoom in on oxford box...Oxford should be written in thick black marker
• Storyline in opening sequence should be clearer
• Still shot opening of room instead of moving camera from one side of the room to another
• Acting needs to be improved
• We need more of a range of different shots
• Make distribution company opening shorter
• Photos should be taken in a school background so the viewer knows it is maybe old photos
• Transition from photo to last shot needs to be slower

Therefore, based on these criticisms we decided that we would need to re-shoot our title sequence and we will be shooting it next week, during half-term